The Official Writing Challenge
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10/12/06
Hee hee... This is a cute, well written story! And, heh, the mother and the daughter, Lisa, remind me of my own mother and sister: my mother would freak, and my sister would probably look up "How To Put Out a Fire" on the internet. The repetition of that one line made me laugh out loud!
10/15/06
Very interesting character study. Many families are like this: varying degrees of response to the same crises. Nicely told!
Yup I could picture it all - hmmm - maybe I've seen it all....is every family like this?
*smile*