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10/12/06
Neat story! I loved the twist on how he discovered that his own house was on fire and then how relieved he was to see they were all okay.
10/12/06
Neat story! I loved the twist on how he discovered that his own house was on fire and then how relieved he was to see they were all okay.
10/13/06
You've written a heart-warming story with a lovely lesson. I'm pretty sure that firefighters know from the time they leave the station what address they're going to, so I wonder if a small re-write could correct that...but I could be mistaken. In any case, that would be awful for the firefighter, and you did a good job communicating it.
A good story. Glad that the fire-fighter found his family safe.
10/13/06
Very good story. A nice twist on what could have been a predictable tale. Nicely done.
Excellent writing! I know how I feel after I work on something for a long time and it gets destroyed. I can only imagine how devastated your MC must be.