The Official Writing Challenge
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10/12/06
Great anology. How very true is your message. Good job.
10/12/06
Your 3rd paragraph is just wonderful! Thanks so much! Be careful of things that could be caught with a close edit: a switch in tense, an unnecessary apostrophe, that sort of thing. This is well thought out and edifying.
10/13/06
I like the line: My fire-fighter is fire proof. He can't be destroyed. How true!

Very good illustration of this precious truth.
10/13/06
Great job.