The Official Writing Challenge
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09/15/06
Beautiful descriptions and excellent weaving in use of the bible verses.
09/18/06
I enjoyed this piece! Your writing style had a soothing effect on my spirit or maybe it was the expert seasoning of scripture springled throughout the narrative.

Either way it brought tranquility to my soul. One word of caution though, be more diligent with your proofreading next time! Good work!
10/08/06
Thank you for your comments. I will avoid rushing in my contribution.