The Official Writing Challenge
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Nice little parable. I like the tomato reference. They're the tastiest out of the garden, in my opinion.
Very cute story with a built-in-lesson. "Dedo" threw me. Is that a nickname for Lonnie? Might be better to stick with one name throughout, since it's a short piece. That's a small thing, however. Your writing is superb!
09/18/06
Interesting story. I really enjoyed it!
09/18/06
Short but sweet - a wonderful parable! Your description is very nice. Great job!
09/18/06
I truly enjoyed this. An excellent way to illustrate God's care for us. He can use things which seem awful to us, but they can yield His fruit in our lives.
09/21/06
Way to go Karen. Excellent job. 2nd place!!! God bless.
09/21/06
Brilliant Karen. Love the last line!
09/22/06
Brilliant way to teach a lesson. Good work. I enjoyed it.
09/27/06
This is wonderful! I Love the lessons the Lord gives in such simple and yet profound ways. Something to chew on when the proverbial wheelbarrow full of my own life's "fertilizer" starts "fermenting."