The Official Writing Challenge
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09/18/06
Very nice! What a comforting story of grace. I really enjoyed this. Thank you for sharing it.
09/18/06
I think there was a typo in this sentence “This is how He see you." Should it be sees?
Pretty good story, a little confusing in some places, maybe use 'she' a little less?