The Official Writing Challenge
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You did a great job retelling a sad story. Although, I've read this and have had this told to me many times, you held my interest throughout.

This needed more creativity. I'm not saying put words in God's mouth, but if you had told this story from the pov of the olive trees then it would have been more intriguing.

Good job. :)
This told the story in a straightforward way, and it reminded us all of that Good Friday evening.
Simple and engaging. Pretty good.