The Official Writing Challenge
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09/17/06
What a beautiful prayer!! I loved the flow, very easy to read and I loved the "Shield me from creepies and dangerous weeds"! Great poem!
09/18/06
Such a lovely poem! It would make a great hymn. Thank you for putting such deep feelings into words!
09/18/06
This was wonderful to read. I love the line "Of a million new flowers and fruits of your love, always giving you glory and praise" Great job!
This is just beautiful, Vivian! You really have a special gift of expressing yourself in poetry!