The Official Writing Challenge
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09/15/06
I loved this story! I could feel a sinking in my heart as I read the beginning and by the end I could feel her joy. What a beautiful lesson, very enjoyable to read!
09/17/06
A lovely story! I enjoyed your description and characterization. Nice job!
09/17/06
Very nice. The title made me smile. The descriptions of the home and its inmates seemed very real. Glad it had a happy ending!
09/18/06
This story is wonderful, and I can imagine it happening. People thrive when they have a purpose in life, and it is good that she followed the Spirit's leading. Nicely done!
09/18/06
Great title--it really caught my attention. Your storyline was nicely done. Noticed a few misspellings and grammar items which could strengthen this lovely story about finding purpose in life. It's probably just me, but I was a little uncomfortable with the word "inmates" for the nursing home residents. While I'm sure many feel this way, it seemed a bit harsh for these lovely older people. Great job!
09/18/06
Great title--it really caught my attention. Your storyline was nicely done. Noticed a few misspellings and grammar items which could strengthen this lovely story about finding purpose in life. It's probably just me, but I was a little uncomfortable with the word "inmates" for the nursing home residents. While I'm sure many feel this way, it seemed a bit harsh for these lovely older people. Great job!
09/18/06
Interesting twists and turns. The title was catchy-I'm glad I took the time to read this. Great job!