The Official Writing Challenge
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09/14/06
INTERESTING STORY. VIVID IMMAGINATION.KEEP ON WRITING.
What a lovely dream for a single mother. Think I'll dream it tonight.
09/18/06
Very moving and well written. I could feel the progression of her thoughts. A wonderful tale of acceptance and forgiveness!
09/21/06
Great story and a great message. Well-finished. The imagery in the last paragraph was especially good. It contrasted well with the first paragraph where she worked with anger in the garden - now it was a place of joy, fruit, warmth and diamonds. Wonderful reminder of what God's grace can do when we are willing to forgive and allow His love to flow through us.
Good story! Well written! I was moved by your writing. Good job!