The Official Writing Challenge
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09/14/06
Very nice entry. You had some great descriptions, and I also thought that it was a very unique and creative approach. I also love the idea of the Samurai and the Sword...very awesome.

Well done!
09/15/06
I agree, these are powerful images. yOU think the chldren of God are predators of Satan?! I had not thought of that before. Good job.
09/17/06
Very well written and some wonderful descriptions. This was a different but wonderful point of view. Well done!
A very fresh perspective backed up by some wonderful descriptions. Some polishing with the editing would make this a real dazzler - but this was lovely. Keep writing. God bless xx