The Official Writing Challenge
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A nice portrayal of the creation story. You might want to sharpen up your punctuation.
Nice rhythm, and a nice read.
09/18/06
I like the way that you have let your imagination go on parts of this: Then went up/
A watery spray/That covered the hills/And wet the clay. First line of stanza 17 is a bit of a problem. Otherwise, well done in this clear portrayal of creation.