The Official Writing Challenge
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09/10/06
Powerful allegory! Thanks for letting the piece speak for itself, and not adding a moral or lesson at the end. This is great, great stuff.
09/10/06
What an interesting piece! Very well told. It stands on its own as a tale of steadfast friendship; as well as a powerful allegory. I like that she didn't abandon her friend until she had to.
From the title to the final line, this is a gripping tale. Great job!
09/13/06
Wow - this had me spellbound from beginning to end! Such wonderful description. Great job!
09/13/06
Awesome descriptions and unique tale. Very nicely done. Looks like we might have another Allen moving up the ranks, huh? (wink, wink)
09/13/06
Super job. The dialogue was smooth and the descriptions superb. A missing quotation mark and comma, but very good work. Keep it up!
09/13/06
A riveting piece that is very nicely written. Good job!
09/14/06
Wow! This awesomely written! The reader hangs on every word and I love the picture painted of the whole scene. Kudos to the writer!