The Official Writing Challenge
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Powerful allegory! Thanks for letting the piece speak for itself, and not adding a moral or lesson at the end. This is great, great stuff.
What an interesting piece! Very well told. It stands on its own as a tale of steadfast friendship; as well as a powerful allegory. I like that she didn't abandon her friend until she had to.
From the title to the final line, this is a gripping tale. Great job!
Wow - this had me spellbound from beginning to end! Such wonderful description. Great job!
Awesome descriptions and unique tale. Very nicely done. Looks like we might have another Allen moving up the ranks, huh? (wink, wink)
Super job. The dialogue was smooth and the descriptions superb. A missing quotation mark and comma, but very good work. Keep it up!
A riveting piece that is very nicely written. Good job!
Wow! This awesomely written! The reader hangs on every word and I love the picture painted of the whole scene. Kudos to the writer!