The Official Writing Challenge
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09/10/06
I'd sure like to see this exapnded--to read more about specifically how the different stages of our lives are comparable to the parts of a river. Perhaps a paragraph for each metaphor?

All in all, a very apt and fitting essay.
09/10/06
This is very nice and I like the way you separated it into two parts. Very nice!