The Official Writing Challenge
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09/09/06
The drama in this passage was clearly written. Very descriptive words. Nice ending, too!
09/11/06
Ooh, you had me tensely reading ahead, hoping that he'd make it! Nice descriptions.
Noticed a "typo" near the end - I think "river" is missin an "r." ;) Not to worry, my entry had an "oops" too. lol
Great job - keep on writing!