The Official Writing Challenge
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09/09/06
A nice way to weave your testimony through a popular and relevant song.
09/11/06
Now the song's going to be stuck in my head all evening...not a bad thing. ;)
Nice point, and I like the way you added your personal touch to a well-loved song.
It might be a style issue, but I think some kind of punctuation could help at the ends of your lines.
Thanks for sharing! Keep writing!