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The Home for Christian Writers! The Official Writing Challenge BACK TO CHALLENGE MAIN INSTRUCTIONS how it works submission rules guidelines for choosing a level ENTRIES submit your entry read current entries read past entries challenge winners how it works   Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner) Topic: River (08/31/06) TITLE: Peace Like a River By Tim Pickl 09/06/06  LEAVE COMMENT ON ARTICLE  SEND A PRIVATE COMMENT  SEND ARTICLE TO A FRIEND  ADD TO MY FAVORITES I've heard it said and I've heard it sung I've got peace like a river I've got peace like a river I've got peace like a river in my soul I've got peace like a river I've got peace like a river I've got peace like a river in my soul I never knew what they meant when they sang about peace Until one day Praise God! that peace of God happened to me I was walking the wrong way living in the sickness of sin Then I met a man who loved me and taught me about Him I've heard it said and I've heard it sung I've got joy like a fountain I've got joy like a fountain I've got joy like a fountain in my soul I've got joy like a fountain I've got joy like a fountain I've got joy like a fountain in my soul I never knew what they meant when they sang about joy Until I received that joy unspeakable full of glory! I was walking the wrong way living in the sickness of sin Then I met a man who loved me and taught me about Him I've heard it said and I've heard it sung I've got love like an ocean I've got love like an ocean I've got love like an ocean in my soul I've got love like an ocean I've got love like an ocean I've got love like an ocean in my soul I never knew what they meant when they sang about love Until I received the gift of the Holy Ghost from above! I was walking the wrong way living in the sickness of sin Then I met a man who loved me and taught me about Him But now-- I've got peace like a river I've got peace like a river I've got peace like a river in my soul I've got peace like a river I've got peace like a river I've got peace like a river in my soul I've got joy like a fountain I've got joy like a fountain I've got joy like a fountain in my soul I've got joy like a fountain I've got joy like a fountain I've got joy like a fountain in my soul I've got love like an ocean I've got love like an ocean I've got love like an ocean in my soul I've got love like an ocean I've got love like an ocean I've got love like an ocean in my soul Come on in, the water's fine! PREVIOUS ENTRY | NEXT ENTRY SUBMIT YOUR ENTRY FOR THIS WEEK'S CHALLENGE The opinions expressed by authors may not necessarily reflect the opinion of FaithWriters.com. This article has been read 625 times Member Comments Member Date Donna Emery  09/09/06 A nice way to weave your testimony through a popular and relevant song. Rachel Burkum  09/11/06 Now the song's going to be stuck in my head all evening...not a bad thing. ;) Nice point, and I like the way you added your personal touch to a well-loved song. It might be a style issue, but I think some kind of punctuation could help at the ends of your lines. Thanks for sharing! Keep writing!

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