The Official Writing Challenge
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09/08/06
Lovely! It rings true, and its simplicity makes it very satisfying.
09/10/06
What a sweet testimony!

Watch your capitalization; you have several words capitalized that need not be.

Otherwise, a beautiful story of a wonderful stop in faith's journey.
09/10/06
What a wonderful testimony! I enjoyed really getting into the character's thoughts throughout. Nice job!