The Official Writing Challenge
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09/07/06
very lovely!
09/08/06
interesting
Marvelous way with words. Loved it. Made me think and I want to read it again.
09/10/06
Absolutely beautiful.
09/10/06
How beautiful.
09/10/06
What a neat approach! I definitely loved your second to last paragraph the best - great explanation/detail there! Very nice!!
09/10/06
I like how you personified the river/time. My only suggestion would be the in the phrase "power that is sapped from the flow of water", maybe you could continue to personify the water. ie. power that is sapped from me (or something like that). Cool take on the topic.