The Official Writing Challenge
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09/07/06
this is just beautiful in its simplicity. I can feel the calm and imagine the tranquility. Very nice!
As I read your entry I found my breathing slowing and I'd bet my blood pressure lowered. My mind was filled with the picture you were painting and peace stole over me and I was totally open by the time you turned to praising God. Thanks.
09/11/06
So tranquil, so calm, so God-like. Perfect entry: Short, sweet and to the point. Loved it! Kudos.
What a lovely, finely drawn piece. This is like a slice of chocolate cake - rich, delicious and satisfying. God bless. xx