The Official Writing Challenge
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09/01/06
Wow! This was really good. I especially liked the piece with how his eyes changed from grey to blue. :)
09/01/06
Love the ambiance you created with this one. Wonderful job! You definitely transported me - I was sitting right next to Bogart, I tell you!
09/02/06
I love that song, and I loved this story. How real your description seems. Thanks for sharing it.
Excellent story! I love the drama, the character of Bogey and your concept of sharing God. Great writing! I hope this one places--it's very creative and well written! Well done!
09/05/06
Awesome voice, captivating writing.
09/06/06
I feel like I've just walked out of a movie - this was so real. Really a great write and an enjoyable read...Great job!
09/06/06
I love the way you intertwine a theology of beauty and creativity in your story. Very strong sense of place and character.
09/06/06
I thought I was about to hear..."ROLL EM - and... ACTION!" You've done some great scene setting here. Having watched Bogart before has helped me imagine it even better. Good Job. :)
You did a great job on this! I don't think you'll be a beginner for long!
09/06/06
What I like- I had to check twice to see what level I was in! This should be in Masters because it was excellen. Wonderful ending -very descriptive words and I loved the voice throughout. Add in great content and you have a winner:) Can't wait to see who wrote this and read more from you. great job ...I can't think of anything I would change ( maybe the hell, but I know that was part of the character.)
09/06/06
Great Job!! You're movin' up.
God Bless and keep writing...
Kaye
09/06/06
Beginners? I don't think so. This is an absolutely fabulous entry. Excellent writing! Play it again, Sam! :-)