The Official Writing Challenge
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09/02/06
Excellent! As a nurse, I can relate to this scenario and envision it easily. Your writing is so powerful. I can't help but wonder if this is a true story, and if you are also a nurse. You are certainly a writer. Blessings to you.
09/03/06
This was great :O) I worked Geriatrics for 9 years and I really loved how you looked at the situation through the eyes of Belle.

My Favorite lines:
Belle tried to raise her hand to wipe the tear away. Her arm shook, but her hand went nowhere, and the nurse, not understanding, simply noted that her patient was agitated. Belle tried to talk, to say something comforting. No noise came out.

This brought a tear.Thanks for your compassion and your heart. Great writing God Bless,Kaye
09/06/06
Very nicely done, and powerful. The ending brought tears to my eyes.
09/16/06
Beautifully written! Very well done!