The Official Writing Challenge
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08/31/06
I think that although I like the concept of this piece, it is lacking in appropriate punctuation. I also think that you could expand and make it longer. However, the very fact that I would be interested in reading more should encourage you! Thanyou for sharing, God bless :)
08/31/06
I appreciate the message very much. Thanks.
09/04/06
You have some very deep thoughts, but need some polishing. Overall, this was great; it kept my attention to the end.
When referring to God, it should always be a capital G. Watch your spelling, and always use spell check.

You have a good concept, but with a bit of expansion it could be much better.

Keep writing and sharing.