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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Melody (08/24/06)

TITLE: Its all sweet arrangment of sounds
By Jason Taff
08/26/06


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Isnít it funny how the miracle of gods voice works. He simply speaks and out comes a melody, a sweet arrangement of sounds. We have people such as Beethoven all the way to today current artist 50 cent, or news boys from Christina to non Christian people are trying to make sounds that we as humans will like, called melodies.. Does it make you think how can we make a noise that pleases god? Well you can stop thinking now cause as long as our works are glorifying to god, it is a melody to god , if your tounge is obeying to him isnít that a melody to god whether itís a young girl singing at the top of her lungs from the inside of her bath tub to a low barking noise of your grandpa singing a tune out on the porch late at night. Its all a melody. Repeat after me its all a melody as long as you glorifying god. Its all a sweet arrangement of sounds.


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Bella Louise08/31/06
I think that although I like the concept of this piece, it is lacking in appropriate punctuation. I also think that you could expand and make it longer. However, the very fact that I would be interested in reading more should encourage you! Thanyou for sharing, God bless :)
Lynda Schultz 08/31/06
I appreciate the message very much. Thanks.
Rhonda Clark 09/04/06
You have some very deep thoughts, but need some polishing. Overall, this was great; it kept my attention to the end.
Valerie Routhieaux09/07/06
When referring to God, it should always be a capital G. Watch your spelling, and always use spell check.

You have a good concept, but with a bit of expansion it could be much better.

Keep writing and sharing.