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08/31/06
The icing on this cake for me were these final lines: "Like pearls, one by one I strung them on the thread of melody that had bound us for fifteen years. When despair threatens to drown me, I shall finger each pearl like a rosary."

Good stuff.
09/01/06
A lovely love song. How blessed you were to find this man, and how wonderful it was that you shared the story of your combined melody.

May God bless you!
09/05/06
If this is true, thanks for sharing your heart and words with us. I also felt a pang when I got to the sentence about the pearls. It added a special touch. Blessings.