The Official Writing Challenge
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08/31/06
Beautiful reminder that when we sing to the Lord, He always hears us.
A Melody of Faith is a good title for your work... it truly reads like one. Just a suggestion, but I think it would read that much stronger if you ended with a praise line. The reader would be left with the beautiful images of song you lay out so nicely.
You have a good beginning. There is a lot here that could be developed further.

Watch your sentences. Some of your sentences are part of the whole thought, and shouldn't be broken in two sentences.

Keep writing.