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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Melody (08/24/06)

TITLE: A Melody of Faith
By Gerald W. White Jr.
08/25/06


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A Melody of Faith



Each time we praise our Lord and Saviors name, it may be the
most beautiful melody in his ear. That our Lord just loves to hear.

Each time a lost soul cries out to Jesus, it resounds in a most
triumphant tune.
A melody of joy as sin is washed away. Finally with their Savior,
they commune.

Many melodies of faith rise up to Him, as if on the wings of a dove.
As we pray for guidance, peace, and love.

When we sing our hearts melody of faith, for blessings that will be
done. He gladly answers each and every one.

But sometimes the melody that our Lord hears, is just resentful
and callous. That brings our Dear Lord to tears.

So we must worship our Savior every day, with psalms and hymns,
and heartfelt praise.

Let Him hear the melody and song from those who love Him.
Rather than the iniquitous noise from those who deny Him in many ways.


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Donna Emery08/31/06
Beautiful reminder that when we sing to the Lord, He always hears us.
Marita Vandertogt09/04/06
A Melody of Faith is a good title for your work... it truly reads like one. Just a suggestion, but I think it would read that much stronger if you ended with a praise line. The reader would be left with the beautiful images of song you lay out so nicely.
Valerie Routhieaux09/05/06
You have a good beginning. There is a lot here that could be developed further.

Watch your sentences. Some of your sentences are part of the whole thought, and shouldn't be broken in two sentences.

Keep writing.