The Official Writing Challenge
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08/31/06
Wow!!! Extremely powerful!! This is a wake up call to those who wait to call on Jesus to save them. We are fragile as humans and you have shown just how fragile. Great writing, great story, great truth. God Bless,Kaye
08/31/06
LOVE IT!
08/31/06
very nice story. A happy ending indeed.
09/02/06
Excellent writing. Only in Level 1, huh? You quickly developed the scene and the characters and then introduced God's Grace. Nicely descriptive too.
You did a very good job with this piece. Even in the midst of war, a melody can be heard if we are attuned to hear it.

You write as someone who has experienced war first hand.

Keep writing and sharing. You have a true gift.