The Official Writing Challenge
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Very good. Reads like a devotional. Keep writing and sharing.
08/31/06
Very nice, and very well put. Blessings!
I had the same song in my head this week. The points you make are dead on. I was nodding my head in agreement as I read along,especially the example of the little pictures turning into a big picture.
You make some excellent points in this piece. I like the concept of the picture of our world seen at a distance, yet being comprised of many smaller pictures. My only suggestion would be to break that large paragraph near the end into smaller paragraphs for an easier read. Well done, though. I enjoyed reading this.