The Official Writing Challenge
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08/31/06
Wow! Excellent work and your last line is an absolute killer!
08/31/06
This is a great poem, showing us how melody plays a big part in all aspects of our lives as we walk "together".

I love this line:What happens when everyone forgets about “together”?

Good question and great writing....God Bless, Kaye
Great job. Lots to think about, especially that last line.

Keep on writing and sharing.
08/31/06
Very nice! Wouldn't it be wonderful if we all did "sing together"?
excellent work i enjoyed it alt