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I really enjoyed reading this. What a true message, and a unique way to write it. Thank you for sharing this.
Loved this-especially your portrayal of "cassie"
Smart grandfather and a super story. Great job!
I loved this story. Good job. Keep writing and sharing.
Wonderfully written.. I just love it, made me laugh, made me cry..
excellent metaphor and so true! Well done!
This was a wonderful story! From the first sentence, it held my attention. Grandpa was wise, filled with a message from God. And Cassie was filled with such intense emotion, yet still a child as depicted by your closing sentence. I loved it!
I truly enjoyed reading this piece. Wonderfully written, well done, keep writing.
Beautiful writing.
Excellent story. Great job.
Great story! You used the dialogue well to give the Grandpa character. Nice writing!
What a wonderful thought to remember, that whatever happens in my life, happy or sad, it's part of God's song. Thank you for your story.
Beautiful story and excellent portrayal of Cassie and Grandpa. I thoroughly enjoyed it and the message.
This was very touching, with a great message! Thanks for writing it!
Charming story with a great message! :-)
Love the dialect, and the sweet, sweet message. You did a wonderful job of characterization in both characters! Excellent writing!