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08/31/06
this sounds like something from the book of Psalms! Very nice!
Very comforting. You brought a smile to my face.
Before I came to the word Psalms in your poem, I thought this reads like a psalm and a very good one too. I can even hear a background strumming of an instrument to accompany your Melody. Great work.
09/11/06
Your entry made me think of lyrics of a song...a melody. (You have no PM - so please contact me, important) nicely done for a beginner, and welcome aboard FW.