The Official Writing Challenge
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08/24/06
And when men saw the Christ arise
They saw the cross with different eyes

This stantza touched me most. I loved being reminded of the tranistional emotion that the cross brought to the first Christians.

Well done
08/29/06
"Then thunder peeled..." This should be pealed.

Otherwise, good meter and rhyme--nice job!
08/29/06
This is beautifully wrought! Good rhyme, some surprises.

My favorites?
"It was not shame that wreathed His head
But sin redeemed to free the dead

Those arms were spread, not on a tree
But on the hope of victory"

I guess these verses spoke most to my spirit. Good job!