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08/27/06
This was very interesting--a unique approach to the topic, and a testament to a mother's love and sacrifice.

You switched back and forth between past tense and present tense a few times--a little bit disorienting.

A fascinating story that reads like non-fiction--is it?
08/29/06
Wonderful description of what it's like to live with food allergies and have a child with them as well. That is also my life. I'm thankful none of my allergies are life threatening (though my daughter carries an epi-pen.) Thanks for making me feel a little less alone in this struggle!