The Official Writing Challenge
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Good content in this article! It would be a great salvation tract...:o)

I would look to clean up the punctuation by using less hyphens as well as making sure that there are spaces after a period. Also watch the capitalization! Be consistent...

One other thing I noticed was sentence structure. It is helpful to read aloud your writing several times to make sure sentences flow and do not sound incomplete or choppy.

These suggestions are all technical and such things come in time (I know they are still coming for me!). Again your article was a very clear reminder of Christ's death on the cross (and eventual resurrection) means for all humanity. Good work!