The Official Writing Challenge
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08/27/06
This definitely got me thinking!! Excellent message here. It may be me, but the meter of this made it drag a bit - maybe add a bit of variety so it doesn't get quite so "Singsong", if you know what I mean. Of course, I am not a poet, so it may just be me. Keep writing!!