The Official Writing Challenge
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08/24/06
What I like - loved the way you wrote this - the detail and the way you did the dialogue. Wonderful. Great devotional.

What I might change - nothing stuck out!:) at first I thought the expression 'three sheets to the wind ' was too overused and but then the next sentence made me think it worked well with your voice.
Very creative and told a great story and good point!
08/26/06
Oh yes, you can really communicate beautifully.
Love your prose style and its such an honest tale it applys to all of us on the whole. I recommend it as a great read for all.
08/27/06
Great story and thanks for the reminder that it's really all about GRACE! I grew up in a judgemental church system and sometimes I still struggle to respond with grace instead of criticism. Thanks for sharing!
08/29/06
Very nice. It left me wondering why the/your husband spent time in jail, but that really isn't crucial to your point!
10/01/06
Extremely well written. You made many a good point in this essay - and it sank in, giving me a new insight into the symbol of the Cross. Thanks for sharing. Very nicely done.