The Official Writing Challenge
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08/17/06
This is lovely--evocative of e. e. cummings' lighter work.
08/18/06
This one made me smile! It's wonderful. Thanks. Julia
08/19/06
I loved this! So sweet and charming and innocent and wonderful. I"m now tracking you!!! This warmed my heart!
08/20/06
This was charming. It spoke to me of childhood. It was just delightful! You have real talent!
08/22/06
Full of imagery and colour. Wonderful. Keep it up.
08/22/06
Welcome to Fatihwriters! This is very very lovely, and very very good. You don't belong in beginners if this this is representative of your work.
08/22/06
The Title caught my eye, then the imagery kept me glued, giving me a taste of childhood once more. Loved it! A great imagination! Keep it up!
08/22/06
Excellent poetry. I loved every word! Welcome to the challenge.
08/22/06
This was refreshing and totally different than what I usually see here! I loved it! Great job of writing. I wish I had the perfect word to describe your style- whimsical, deligthful???
very creative poem...flowed nicely
08/23/06
This is a good entry. It lost focus near the end, but is filled with charming imagery.
08/23/06
Very vivid imagery of a wonderful summer :) fun stuff!