The Official Writing Challenge
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Very true.

Consider lengthening this by adding anecdotes from your life. Also, consider eliminating the quotation marks around so many of your phrases; they weaken your sentences.

Lovely little devotional--I look forward to reading more.
I was confused by the first sentence--it needs to be reworked.

I'd like to see this expanded, with examples to back up your points (maybe even examples from your own life and experiences).

This is a really good sentence: "These assignments are tailored to our detailed life measurements"--very creative!