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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Valley (08/10/06)

TITLE: valley is deep tell me why
By abayomi shokoya
08/15/06


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PLEASE TELL ME WHY
PLEASE TELL ME WHY A GREAT NATION BLACK AND PROUD, HAVINGB SURVIVED THE ORDEAL OF IMPERIALISM AND COLONIALISM, CANNOT FEEL TO RULE OR MISRULE ITSELF, WITHOUT THE INTERFERENCE OFFOREIGN DO-GOODERS AND COLONIALISM?
I WOULD QUICKLY BLAME IT ON POLITICAL INCOMPETENT AND TIMIDITY AMONG THE POWER THAT BE.
BUT MY HONEST GUESS MAY NOT BE REALLY GOOD AS YOURS SO, PLEASE TELL ME WHY?

PLEASE TELL ME WHY A GREAT NATION HAVING ACHIEVED POLITICAL INDEPENDENCE SEVERAL DECADES AGO CANNOT REALLY AND TRULY INVOLVE A STABLE POLITICAL SYSTEM THAT WILL PROMOTE AND SUSTAIN UNITY, PROGRESS AND GOOD GOVERNMENT IN A TRUE DEMOCRATIC SETTING?
I WOULD QUCKLY BLAME IT ON LACK OF POLITICAL VISION AND LACK OF EFFECTIVE LEADERSHIP AMONG THE POWERS THAT BE.
BUT MY HONEST GUESS MAY NOT REALLY BE GOOD AS YOURS, PLEASE TELL ME WHY?

PLEASE TELL ME WHY A GREAT NATION HAVING THE LARGEST POPULATION,IN THE MODERN BLACK AFRICA.RECORD HIGHLY INFLATED FIGURES FOR FAVOURED ETHNIC GROUPS AND NOT A VITAL STATISTICS FOR PLANNING AND NATION BUILDING?
I QUICKLY BLAME IT ON DISHONESTY, IGNORANCE AND INDISCIPLINE AMONG THE ENTIRE CITIZENS.
BUT MY HONEST GUESS MAY NOT REALLY GOOD AS YOURS SO PLEASE TE ME WHY?

PLEASE TELL ME WHY A GREAT NATION HAVING A HIGH PERCENTAGE OF WELL EDUCATED ELITES.TRAINED BOTH LOCALLY AND ABROAD IN MANY FIELD S OF HUMAN LEARNING, A NATION THAT HAS RECRULTED FOREIGN EXPERTS, CONSULTANTS ADVISERS FOR MANY ASPECTS OF IT DEVELOPMENT, STILL LACKS BEHIND COMPARABLE NATIONS IN AGRICULTURE AND APPLIED SCIENCES, IN BASIC TECHNOLOGY AND TELECOMMUNICATIONS.IN THE PROVISION OF INFRASTRUCTURES FOR ECONOMIC AND INDUSSTRIAL TAKE OFF?
I WOULD QUICKLY BLAME IT ON PLANLESSNESS AND BAD PLANNING STRTEGIES ON WRONG AND MIS-EMPLOYMENT IN RELATION TO THE NATIONS NEEDS.
BUT MY HONEST GUESS MAY NOT REALLY BE LIKE YOURS SO PLEASE TELL ME WHY?

PLEASE TELL ME WHY A GREAT NATION WHICH GOD HAS RICHLY ENDOWED WITH WEALTH AND NATURAL RESOURCES, WITH HUMAN RESOURCES AND CHEAP LABOUR CANNOT PROVITDE FULL EMPLOYMENT FOR AL ITS EMPLOYABLE CITIZEN?
I WOULD QUICLY BLAME IT ON MISEDUCATION AND MISEMPLOYMENT ON POOR ECONOMIC AND MONETARY POLICIES IN RELATION TO THE NATIONíS NEEDS.
BUT MY HONEST GUESS MAY NOT REALLY BE GOOD AS YOURS SO PLEASE TELL ME WHY?


MY HONEST COMRADE LET IT BE SAID THAT OUR FATHERíS LAND IS LIKE A M IGHTY ROCK WHICH STANDS IN THE GREEN FIELD WHERE THE TERRIBLE TORRENTIAL DOWN POURS OF RAIN IN THE WET SEASON AND OF THE SCORCHING HEAT IN THEB DRY SEASON HAVE NO ADVERSE EFFECT ON IT.


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Jan Ackerson 08/17/06
I have enormous respect for a person who can be so articulate in a second language! This would be much easier to read if not in all capital letters, please. Your passion for your country is very evident--good job!
Allison Egley 08/23/06
I love the feeling and passion brought out in this essay! I think a lot of people in many nations could relate to this. Work on capitalization and punctuation a bit and this will be great. Keep writing.