The Official Writing Challenge
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08/17/06
This is gorgeous poetry (but be careful of it's / its)--but I'd urge you to write more to the topic of the week. Very touching--I loved it.
08/20/06
A very unique, touching poem. I enjoyed it very much.
08/21/06
Although "free verse" doesn't usually do anything for me - THIS ONE did! I Loved it! Only one thing wrong... the Challenge topic was missing. But still it is very, very good, creative and tells it like it is...sometimes I too, wish I had the strength and stamina of a man. Good Job!
08/23/06

I can so idenify with you on this piece. Well written