The Official Writing Challenge
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08/17/06
Very atmospheric writing--I liked it, and the symbolism was very good.

I wondered about the "mirage" at the end, though. Seems like you were running toward something real.

Very visual writing, nicely done.
08/23/06
This is really cool. I like how you show our need for God.
10/17/08
AMEN! It is great to know that we are not alone while in the valley wilderness, that others walk that path as well. I just wrote today to a friend concerning this very thing. thank you!