The Official Writing Challenge
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Sounds like a great devotional. Great take on the topic.

May the Lord continue to guide your quill as you write for the glory of HIM!
08/17/06
You make the valley seem like a very pleasant place, with the cool breezes, etc. Unique approach to the topic. I'd suggest that you leave off the title and the topic from the beginning, and let your reader start right off with your lovely words. Also, watch the spelling of "colleagues." Very nice; I'll read more of your writings.