The Official Writing Challenge
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08/17/06
Wow! Loved the "aha!" moment at the end! Unique POV, well-written.
Loved the story. It kept me on the edge of my seat until the unexpected end. Great job!
This was very good. The suspense kept me reading to the end. Great job. Keep writing
08/23/06
Love it! What a super take on the 23rd. Great job!