The Official Writing Challenge
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08/17/06
What a wonderful testimony! Thank you for sharing it. Two quick things that will bump up the quality of your writing: avoid the use of exclamation marks in essays such as this, and be careful of the "...and I" construction. In most of the cases you have here, it should be "...and me."

Great job here, and keep writing!
Wonderful testimony. We must all learn the lesson of forgiveness at some point in our lives. Great story! I'm happy for you and your dad. Constance
08/22/06
Great message.
Very good. I've been in that valley a few times. Great job with the topic. Keep up the good work
08/24/06

Forgivness is tough but like you say it's so worth it. Great job nicely written. Well done