The Official Writing Challenge
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08/17/06
"...the expension of the valley of my soul..." What a beautiful phrase! This is a very pleasant little outing.

Take note of the number of sentences that begin with "I" or "The" and consider trying out a greater variety of sentence structures.

This is lovely writing.
08/19/06
What a beautiful "stroll" - I enjoyed this very much! Beautiful surroundings beautifully shared.