The Official Writing Challenge
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08/17/06
Wow, this is really good!
08/18/06
Very, VERY powerful! Wow is definitely the right word! We all need this letter. You paint an amazingly moving and accurate picture here. I especially liked your last paragraph.
08/19/06
Hey, I'm ready to sign! Reporting for duty Captain. No excuse, SIR! Thanks for this militaristic view of the battle we are all engaged in, whether we know it or not. Let's put on our battle gear and get out there! Blessings on your writing!
08/24/06
Thank you for taking us into battle, Valerie! This is a very well written and thought out piece. May we all meet on the mountain someday! :-)