The Official Writing Challenge
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08/17/06
Nice thought here! To liven it up, you might want to throw in a specific personal experience. Thanks for sharing with us!
08/18/06
Easy-going and pleasant to read. Consider expanding to several paragraphs, with anecdotes and examples. Nice voice.
08/22/06
Them-there-hills - What a great line to use for a valley story. I wish I had thought of it. It could have made for a great story. Expand on these idea and you will expand our understanding.