The Official Writing Challenge
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Very nice. Rather sad but has a good ending. A good reminder to keep going when grief wants to weigh us down.

I like stories in poems. I am experimenting with that style myself.

08/13/06
This was beautiful and moving. You used some lovely descriptions. THe next challenge in your writing is going to be to tighten up rhyme and meter wiithout losing 'soul'. Good job.