The Official Writing Challenge
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08/10/06
Wow! An inspiring piece, I really enjoyed it a lot. It was a bit difficult to follow, but a few extra spaces in between a few of the lines would fix that easily I think.
08/11/06
I really liked this. I agree that a few extra spaces to help separate things would make it easier to follow. I like the idea of an artist's visions coming to life
08/13/06
I agree with the comments above, but would like to add that I enjoyed the sense of the journey she was on.
08/14/06
Me! Me! You wrote about me! A creative being screaming to be noticed, uncertain of their calling at times. This is in beginners?! What? I really enjoy how you tell a story with this style of writing. Beutimus!! That's a word, really it is!!!

Okay, I hope this works. It wouldn't let me post anything a minute ago.
08/16/06
You have some wonderful imagery here! Enjoyed this - and agree with the above comments. Keep writing!
What a vivid traveling through a life.