The Official Writing Challenge
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08/11/06
I like the concept, but a little insight into how she died would have been nice. Did she die during surgery? Did she commit suicide because she still wasn't "thin enough?" Perhaps it's something you wanted to be left up to the reader, and wanted it to be a mystery, but a few more clues would have been great. A unique approach to this topic.
08/14/06
Good title, and your dialogue was very good indeed. Well done.
A very impacting article. The last line is the answer to it all.