The Official Writing Challenge
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08/14/06
An interesting piece. I think the pastor's leadership may need a bit more subtlety (!), but the writing is good. An interesting take on the piece.
08/17/06
I really like this! Great description, and what a wonderful concept. Wonder if the "old timers" will stick around with the changes? I do agree that the pastor is a bit "too in charge", for lack of a better term, but this is still very solid, effective writing!