The Official Writing Challenge
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03/14/05
Chilling and really made me stop to think. We need to be aware of all that is at work and not underestimate the power and cunningness of the Enemy.
This to me is a winning entry! You set Damien up for us, leading us to his true mission slowly and carefully. The battle he was to win was understood quickly by the reader. You didn't give it to us too easily, made us keep wanting to yell to Benjamin to not listen! I thought this was great.
03/16/05
WOW! Deep!
03/16/05
WOW! Deep!
03/16/05
Great first entry Z! You have a lot of talent.
03/17/05
Very dark and chilling - I loved it! Very well written. If this was your first entry, I'd definitely say you're a natural! Great job!
Blessings, Lynda
03/17/05
bravo!
03/18/05
Great! I'm printing out a copy and taping it to the back page of my copy of "The Screwtape Letters". Hope being compared with C.S. Lewis doesn't go to your head.
03/18/05
This is really great. I like the way Benjamin's mother's words came to warn him in time. Sometimes we ignore wise advice from our loved ones at our peril. But Damien's efforts were thwarted.
Amazing,really moved by this,its such an awesome feeling when we realize the things we here dont come from our own mind, but the enemy, whispering into our ear, GOD is GOOD, to point this out to us, this article is truly a blessing and an eye opener to many...keep up the good work...